Tuesday, June 12, 2012

Making a Wonderful Porridge

On a cold drizzly morning Room 4 made some porridge because the olden day people used to eat porridge. First of all Mrs Pole told Eusipio to go get three jugs of water to tip inside the pot. Then some people came up and sprinkled oatmeal in the pot. Next Mrs Pole got Marcus to come and stir the porridge. After that Mrs Pole got some children to come up and stir and the porridge. It was yummy and incredible. Some people had more then one bowl, like 3 bowls. My feelings about the porridge is porridge is thick and bubblingr. While we were getting our bowls Mrs Pole gave some porridge to the children. Last of all we went to Mrs Pole to put some sugar into the porridge. It looked unbelievable.

3 comments:

  1. Weel done Henrreietta,

    The thing I like about you piece of writing is when you said that the Porridge was thick.

    Next time use lot of amazing words.

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  2. Hi Henrietta,

    The thing I liked about your piece of writing is when you said that the porridge is thick.

    Next time put more amazing words on your piece of writing.

    ReplyDelete

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