Monday, February 19, 2018

I am learning to write a recount of what I did in the weekend.
By Audrey.



In the weekend, I went to the waterpark and it was a bang. It was my baby boy and I who loved it. Some girls and boys were wet. It was a sunny day and I went with my Mum and my Dad and my brother.

4 comments:

  1. I also love going to the water park Audrey, especially when it has been so hot. Nice writing.

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  2. well done Audrey..Awesome work!

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  3. Sounds like you had a great day at the waterpark. Great writing Audrey!

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  4. I really like your story Audrey because you have told us specifically who went with you.

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