tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5115658653435058127.post8093324821123278134..comments2023-11-22T10:26:58.096+13:00Comments on Takiritia 3 @ St Pius X Catholic School : A Disappointed ManMr Goodwinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00912860375539238542noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5115658653435058127.post-33033313929363339682012-12-11T11:32:55.708+13:002012-12-11T11:32:55.708+13:00wow great work jane see you at schoolwow great work jane see you at schoolAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5115658653435058127.post-26034443441293784432012-08-21T14:29:23.438+12:002012-08-21T14:29:23.438+12:00I like your describing words. I like the way you h...I like your describing words. I like the way you have described the athletes hair. Good thinking about the athlete being disappointed. Good job on your writing. I like the way you said that the crowd was cheering as you can see the crowd in the background.<br /><br />Mikaela, Malia, Courtney, Teanoano, Ella<br /><br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5115658653435058127.post-11447281751549655622012-08-21T11:43:34.234+12:002012-08-21T11:43:34.234+12:00Well done Jane with your writing.Well done Jane with your writing.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com