Kia Ora, Greetings, Malo e Lelei, Talofa Lava and Malo e lelei. We are year 2 and 3 learners in the Tikiritia Learning Space. We are the Tikirita 3. Our teacher is Mrs Prasad. We look forward to your comments on our learning.
Tuesday, October 1, 2013
Escape From Danger - A Narrative
Many years ago two cousins called Olidah and Sia. They went to a park in Glen Innes.
They were riding their bikes and suddenly Olidah said to Sia, "That's a big dog with huge sharp teeth." The dog was chasing them. Sia said, "We must run into the tunnel and hide there."
They waited and waited inside the dark tunnel but the dog did not go away. It stayed outside and barked and barked.
They girls were scared and did not know what to do. At last they heard a voice yelling at the dog and it ran away. It was a man from their street who said, "Come on girls." Olidah and Sia thanked him and they all went home together.
By Claudia
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What a lovely retelling of the story, Claudia. I like the way you have put your friends into it. Well done.
ReplyDeleteHello Claudia you have a great picture there and also you are a great friend.
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