Kia Ora, Greetings, Malo e Lelei, Talofa Lava and Malo e lelei.
We are year 2 and 3 learners in the Tikiritia Learning Space.
We are the Tikirita 3. Our teacher is Mrs Prasad.
We look forward to your comments on our learning.
I am learning to write a recount of what I did in the weekend.
By Audrey.
In the weekend, I went to the waterpark and it was a bang. It was my baby boy and I who loved it. Some girls and boys were wet. It was a sunny day and I went with my Mum and my Dad and my brother.
I also love going to the water park Audrey, especially when it has been so hot. Nice writing.
ReplyDeletewell done Audrey..Awesome work!
ReplyDeleteSounds like you had a great day at the waterpark. Great writing Audrey!
ReplyDeleteI really like your story Audrey because you have told us specifically who went with you.
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