I am learning to write down my ideas into a story.
By: Melie
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To-day I went to the movies and a picnic for my birthday. My one sister came and 5 brothers came too and my aunties came and my uncles too. Mum and Dad bought some pizzas and chips. We all came in one car. I came with my Mum and Dad's 4 sisters.
That's a lot of people for one car. Happy birthday! I am sure you had a great time. Excellent writing.
ReplyDeleteI have to agree with Mr C haha! Melie actually went to Rainbow's End with just one of her first cousins which we had fit perfectly in the car �� Love the idea of how she wanted to include her whole family though. Awesome imagination Melie.
ReplyDeleteWell done Melie. I love your pictures too. Keep trying harder.
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