My Holiday
In the holidays I went to the beach with my mum and dad. I saw Macky at the beach. Then I went on the flying fox but Macky was too scared to go on the flying fox. I felt very happy. Then I went for a swim. After that I went back on the flying fox then I felt very scared. Last of all Macky's mum said to come here. Then Macky went back home and I went home too.
By Malakai
Lovely story when you went to the beach with your family. I like the part when you went on the Flying Fox and Macky was scared. Next time you can use some more about when you went on the Flying Fox.
ReplyDeleteHi Malakai, It was a fun time on the flying fox. I hope you did enjoy riding on it. We did had fun at the pools. Good work!
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