Kia Ora, Greetings, Malo e Lelei, Talofa Lava and Malo e lelei. We are year 2 and 3 learners in the Tikiritia Learning Space. We are the Tikirita 3. Our teacher is Mrs Prasad. We look forward to your comments on our learning.
Friday, August 30, 2013
The Hare and the Tortoise Retold by Sia
One day, on a summer's day, in a pretty meadow lived a show-off Hare and a slow-motion Tortoise. The show-off Hare asked the Tortoise "Do you want a race?"
Tortoise said, "Whatever, if you want a race because I will beat you."
"No.... Because you are the slowest animal in the land."
The Hare decided to eat some grass and take a nap. So the Tortoise was running as fast as he could. Tortoise was waiting at the finish line for silly show-off Hare. Hare got up and he didn't see Tortoise. Then he said "Oh my goodness! I have to go to the finish line." Hare saw Tortoise at the finish line. Hare had to say "Sorry for showing off to you at the start line." So Hare and Tortoise became friends and went home together.
The End
The message is never give up!!
By Sia
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I am glad you didn't give up with your writing, Sia.
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