A Sad End
On a hot Friday afternoon 8 year olds went to the start line. Mrs G said, "On your marks, get set, go!" Then I ran as fast as I could. I went past Paul. "Come on Paul ," I said. When I saw students in the courts I was nervous because I was coming fifth. I heard them cheer for me. When I passed Mrs Pole she said, "Run Stanley!"
I ran around the Church then I went through the courts. I ran almost passed Fanoali'i but I'd fallen over. Mrs Bell picked me up and took me to the sick bay. Next she put on a plaster. Mrs Bell said ,"Do you want to stay here for a while?" "I do," I said. I was sad because I couldn't finish the race.
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Stanley
good boy stanley.I love reading your story so much.
ReplyDeleteGood stanley I really love the way you the full stop, I hope you had a great day at the big race.
ReplyDeleteHi Stanley
ReplyDeleteI like when you write some speech marks and commas.
Kalisi