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"Friday was the best day ever!" I shouted. We had cross country. I think this is our 1st or 2nd. "Nice" I said to myself. The seven year old's were ready to race. We line up in a straight line getting ready to run. When Mrs G said, "Ready, set,go!" We started to run like mad things. Marcus, Alan and I were tying. But I'd finished the whole race. Mrs Pole choose me to be first in the seven year old's. Mrs Koloti's sister said,"Wow!" I was proud of myself. Oh! iIforgot to talk about my favourite part. It was me coming first.
Motu
I also enjoyed the Cross Country race, Motu. Well done for coming first but even better is writing about it and posting on the class blog.
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ReplyDeleteI like what you wrote. I like your favourite part which was when you came first. I wish i came first like you.
ReplyDeleteKalisi
I like the adjectives you used Motu . Well done for getting your writing on the blog.
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Cool title and writing. Well done
ReplyDeleteJoseph
A lovely title Motu.I like the way you have used capitals.
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