Tuesday, September 11, 2012
Good Cross Counrty
Good Cross Country
On a hot Friday afternoon i was walking with my line to the red gate and waited for someone to say go. Miss G said "Get ready, get set, go!" When I ran past June she said, "I'm exhausted." When I ran past my mum I heard, "Come on, come on, my man!" to June. Then I stopped and went to my mum to get her pump because I couldn't breathe and I cried. I stayed with my mum for a little rest from running a long way. When I stayed with my mum, Jane said, "Josie I can't" and I cried. I went back to my line and watched the seniors have their cross country. Their cross country was around the streets and in the courts. My highlight is how I am happy that the cross country is over.
Jane
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I think it is great you have been able to publish your story on the class blog, Jane. Well done for using the speech marks.
ReplyDeleteI like the way you described your words Jane and you have got great writing. Also i like the way you wrote "I'm exhausted."
ReplyDeletefrom Mikaela.