The Big Races
On a hot summer's Friday afternoon we went to the starting line. I waited to hear the whistle. Miss G said "Get set, go!" I ran around the school. Parents were watching and so were the teachers and students. I felt nervous and excited. We ran two times. When we finished we went back to our age chair. Mrs Pole said "Good girl." We watched the seniors. I came fourth. What I didn't like was that I fell down. I felt tired when I ran. My highlight was when I ran around the school. Mrs Williams was looking for the winners.
Kalisi
Well done, Kalisi. I really liked the way you described the wonderful weather we had. I hope you didn't get too hurt when you fell down.
ReplyDeleteKalisi good job. I love the way you used commas and speech marks.
ReplyDeletefrom Mikaela
HI Kalisi it's your soul friend Sonya. I really like your story about Cross Country. I am very proud of you that you run as fast as you could. Keep up the great work Kalisi. From Sonya:)
ReplyDeleteGreat job Kalisi you came forth on that race. I like your sentence Kalisi its really good.
ReplyDeleteby Alilia