On sports day we were having fun and when I was running I won and got a stick. It was fun having a race because I had a another race and I won again. I was so happy that I won and I was really happy that I was the best girl of my year because I was faster then Anna- lisa and Vanessa. I saw Kiwis, Keas, Geckos, and Tuis. I was lucky that I won the race and when I went to my dad I said to him, "did you see me race?" and he said, "yes I did see you race." I was so happy.
Awesome! You won both your races! So yes you are faster than Anna-lisa and Vanessa. Well done you. Maybe next time when you put in speech marks you should put capital letters at the beginning of them. But well done for even putting them in!
ReplyDeleteWell done and looking forward to your next piece of writing. :)