Fun in the Holidays

I went to the pools. I ate lollies at Rainbow's End. I went on an island and I saw a volcano. I saw red and black lava. I put paper in the lava. My Dad picked it up and put a glove on it and it got hot and exploded in the lava. I ran and my Dad ran.

Comments

  1. Hi Etuale, I love your writing about your holiday!
    Keep up the great work!

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  2. This is a fantastic story, Etuale. Great words like 'exploded' really make your writing exciting.

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