Kia Ora, Greetings, Malo e Lelei, Talofa Lava and Malo e lelei.
We are year 2 and 3 learners in the Tikiritia Learning Space.
We are the Tikirita 3. Our teacher is Mrs Prasad.
We look forward to your comments on our learning.
These things make me smile too. I like how your remembered to put capital letters at the start of your sentences. Don't forget to put in your full stops. Your writing made me feel happy. Well done.
It looks like you smile Ho Ho by doing things...playing, jumping, going.
Here's a smile poem to make you smile (I hope)...
Smiling is infectious, you catch it like the flu, When someone smiled at me today, I started smiling too. I passed around the corner and someone saw my grin. When he smiled I realized I'd passed it on to him. I thought about that smile, then I realized its worth. A single smile, just like mine could travel round the earth. So, if you feel a smile begin, don't leave it undetected. Let's start an epidemic quick,
Wow! What a great idea for writing. I love your ideas Ho Ho, and we are going to write about this too one day in Rūma 2. I can see friends are important to you. Ka Pai!
These things make me smile too. I like how your remembered to put capital letters at the start of your sentences. Don't forget to put in your full stops. Your writing made me feel happy. Well done.
ReplyDeleteIt looks like you smile Ho Ho by doing things...playing, jumping, going.
ReplyDeleteHere's a smile poem to make you smile (I hope)...
Smiling is infectious,
you catch it like the flu,
When someone smiled at me today,
I started smiling too.
I passed around the corner
and someone saw my grin.
When he smiled I realized
I'd passed it on to him.
I thought about that smile,
then I realized its worth.
A single smile, just like mine
could travel round the earth.
So, if you feel a smile begin,
don't leave it undetected.
Let's start an epidemic quick,
Wow! What a great idea for writing. I love your ideas Ho Ho, and we are going to write about this too one day in Rūma 2. I can see friends are important to you. Ka Pai!
ReplyDelete