Wednesday, June 16, 2010

The Weekend

It was the weekend. I went everywhere. I went to the movies. Then I went to my uncle's home. After that I went to the pools. Last of all we went home. I loved the day.


  1. Oselise, I like the way you have described your weekend and put everything that you did in the order that it happened. You have also used words that link what happened, by choosing to start your sentences with 'then' and 'last of all'. Well done :)

  2. Fantastic sequencing Oselise, you have thought very carefully about everything that you have done. It sounds like you had a fun weekend.

    Miss Oldfield

  3. The best writing I have ever seen