My Special Day

Last Friday was a special day for Room's 3 and 4. We celebrated our Being Great For God Mass. It was such a special day. My favourite part was when people brought up the bread and the wine because they were fantastic. I loved the way they walked to Father so slowly. After the Mass we could say bye to our Mums and Dads.When we went outside Father said, "Let's Hi Five." I Hi Fived to Father. I said, "Bye," to my Mum.


  1. Well done Viliami. It sounds like you did have a very special mass. I really like the way that you are using speech in your writing, it allows me to really see what is happening in the recount.

    Keep up the great writing.
    Miss G :-)


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