Tuesday, August 24, 2010

The Big Surprise

The Junior School sat quietly in the Music Room waiting for a big surprise. Our eyes were closed and our heads were down. We heard a big, loud KNOCK! KNOCK! KNOCK! We said come in and he was still KNOCKING on the door and we said again come in and he came in. We opened our eyes and the big surprise was a clown. His name wasRonald Mc Donald. It was fun and I felt happy because Miss Oldfield made me laugh because her face was looking funny.


  1. What a wonderful experience for you to have Ronald McDonald come to see you at school. It must of been exciting when you didn't know who was at the door!
    Keep up the great writing Jane :-)
    Miss G

  2. Jane

    Wow I love your story. I like your highlight.