Friday, February 23, 2018

My story

I am learning to write a recount by writing about something I have done.
By Jonah.

I went to the hall to do hip hop. We did dancing moves and we did dancing moves called sliding and kicking but my two favourites are horn and clicking and the teacher's name is Jessie.


  1. I saw your class doing their Hip Hop, Jonah. You looked like you were having lots of fun.

  2. You’ll be getting lots of exercise from Hip hop dancing Jonah. Be very helpful for ripper rugby this year. Keep it up!

  3. Hi Jonah, I'm excited to see your new moves, you can teach me the Click and Horn. Well done Jonah and Keep it Up!

  4. Well done Jonah. I always love reading your stories. Great way of learning is to edit your own writing. You are a great writer. Keep it up.