A fun time in the holidays was when I went to the beach. I went with my family. I was excited. I got ready and dressed up. My mum and dad packed all the food and togs. After that we headed off. Meanwhile when we got there we went to the bus. After a while we got our stuff and set up under a nice tree. I went to the playground with my cousins. While I was at the playground with my cousin we played on the swings. After a while I heard my mum call me, when I got there she told me it's time for a swim, but I was wearing my togs under my clothes. When I got to thewater all of my cousins were there. After that we had a race to see who could get into the water first. Then we jumped in the water. Later on we got out and got changed in the bathroom. Meanwhile we ate. After that we went to the playground. When we had finished playing my mum and I went to buy the ice cream, I got goodie goodie gum drops. Then it was home time! My favourite part of the day was swimming. I felt very happy indeed because I had had such a fantastic time.


  1. I enjoyed reading your holiday recount Alecia. I could just imagine you and your cousins splashing around in the water.I noticed that you are trying to use a variety of sentence beginnings. Well Done!

  2. I'l like to go to the swimming pools Alecia. I like going to the swimming pools. Keep up the good work. Well done

  3. I wished i went in the pools with my family. I enjoyed your story.

  4. I liked reading your story Alecia I hoped you had fun. by Sonya Haiosi

  5. Shot bets. We all a great time at the beach that day.


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