A Sad End

A Sad End

On a hot Friday afternoon 8 year olds went to the start line. Mrs G said, "On your marks, get set, go!" Then I ran as fast as I could. I went past Paul. "Come on Paul ," I said. When I saw students in the courts I was nervous because I was coming fifth. I heard them cheer for me. When I passed Mrs Pole she said, "Run Stanley!"
I ran around the Church then I went through the courts. I ran almost passed Fanoali'i but I'd fallen over. Mrs Bell picked me up and took me to the sick bay. Next she put on a plaster. Mrs Bell said ,"Do you want to stay here for a while?"  "I do," I said. I was sad because I couldn't finish the race.



  1. good boy stanley.I love reading your story so much.

  2. Good stanley I really love the way you the full stop, I hope you had a great day at the big race.

  3. Hi Stanley
    I like when you write some speech marks and commas.



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