Musical Evening



Musical Evening

On Thursday night Dorothy said "Room 4 will sing The Beat Box Boogie." "
Thank you Room 4" said Angelica. I wore a skirt and a white t-shirt with black spots. When i was dancing my mum put 20 dollars on me. I was nervous because they were too many people. I was in the horn stabs. My mum was cheering for me. I saw my whole family and my Aunty. My dad was holding my baby brother. I like the Noisy Boy because I liked the way it was playing loud. I like Saveu's singing because she has got a beautiful voice. Most of all I liked the Noisy Boys. My favourite part was when i was dancing and singing to share our talents with our family and cousins. I moved my arms up and down, side to side. Everyone was clapping for Room 4. My Aunty was proud of me and my sister. June was nervous when she was singing in the microphone. I liked Room 6's band. We went back home. My mum gave me something. I liked the sausage sizzle.

Malia


Comments

  1. I love the way you added your best friend as your picture.

    Teanoano Mataio

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  2. Hi Malia what a lovely day you had keep up the good work. I'm sure your family was proud of you.

    by Henrietta

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  3. Hi Malia what a fantastic night for you. What a wonderful surprise. What good night.

    by Anna-Lisa

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  4. Great piece of writing Malia. Both of us had a good night together the same as the room 7 pupils. Love this writng.

    By ur best friend Fanoali'i

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  5. Great piece of writing Malia. All of Room 4 had a great night that day and we all had lots of fun together.

    By ur best friend Fanoali'i

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  6. great job Malia, we all had a great time at musical evening that time.


    love from fanoali'i

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  7. Great writing Malia, WE ALL HAD A AMAZING TIME AT musical evening

    <3 by Fanoali'i

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  8. I love your story about the musical evening. Wow.

    from Jane Mikyla

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  9. I like the way you described the musical evening.
    From Saveu

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  10. Great job Malia. I like your story.
    from Fano

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  11. :) LOVE FROM TEANO :)October 30, 2012 at 8:17 PM

    Hi Malia its Teano that was a amazing time. We were in different teams but yove done great in you team and you were the best in your team. you have done a fantastic work i loved the way when you put your best friend in you picture you described your story so by! :) (: hahaha BY

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  12. :) LOVE FROM TEANO :)October 30, 2012 at 8:18 PM

    GREAT JOB!

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