Kia Ora, Greetings, Malo e Lelei, Talofa Lava and Malo e lelei.
We are year 2 and 3 learners in the Tikiritia Learning Space.
We are the Tikirita 3. Our teacher is Mrs Prasad.
We look forward to your comments on our learning.
Hey Preston. We like your awesome story it was very detailed. We got excited about all the popcorn and lollies you had that night! We were wondering how you and your family cooked the pig? Was your EE project a video?
Mālo Preston. I love the way you have introduced your writing and also they way you put a personal statement at the end. The children in Rūma 2 would love to make that much popcorn, and have all those lollies too! Thanks for sharing your story.
What an interesting detailed description of New years eve Preston! Well done and continue the great work!
ReplyDeleteHe was so excited to share with the class his writing. Thank you for commenting Naite.
DeleteHey Preston. We like your awesome story it was very detailed. We got excited about all the popcorn and lollies you had that night! We were wondering how you and your family cooked the pig? Was your EE project a video?
ReplyDeleteHi Ellen,
DeleteThank you for commenting. It was a video and he tried to upload it himself. We will do better next time.
Malo Lelei Preston I really like how how you put the chacters in first and then continue the whole story, Keep on the amazing work.
ReplyDeleteMalo Briana for commenting. I will try harder next time.
DeleteMālo Preston. I love the way you have introduced your writing and also they way you put a personal statement at the end. The children in Rūma 2 would love to make that much popcorn, and have all those lollies too! Thanks for sharing your story.
ReplyDeleteHi Jane,
DeleteThank you for writing to us. I will try and put up more stories this coming term.