My Troll

My troll is an ugly troll. He has sharp nails and uses his hands to catch goat meat. He has a coat on to hide the goats under.  
He's got red eyes. On his head is an orange hat. His skin is green. His shoes are curly. He is a naughty troll because he scares people. He has got a scratch on his eye and a scar on his forehead. On his chest there is a rip. My troll lives under a wooden bridge. My troll eats girls and boys and goat meat.

Comments

  1. Hi brother:

    WOW I like your story and your picture that you drew and I like your story about the troll. What I like about your story is when the troll eats girls and boys and goat meat.

    By your big brother Joshua uiha

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  2. hi brother:

    Wow I like your story I never knew that you can write so long like that. What I like about your story is when you told us that your very own troll lives under a wooden bridge.

    Maybe next time you could put more information about your scary old troll.

    By your big brother: Joshua Uiha

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