On Monday morning it was a beautiful sunny day. I was excited because my family was going to see the ALL BLACKS! So I got changed really fast and then I opened the door of my car and sat down. When we arrived into town we were trying to find parking.
Next we found a special parking, a person was about to take the spot but we took it really quickly! So I opened the door of my van and ran out to see the All Blacks but…. They were not there. All we saw was Rugger he said, “Hi.” And I said, “Hi.” back.
Later on the Close Up man came and talked to us and I was on camera.
Then all the sudden we heard music. It was the mighty All Blacks! First I saw Dan Carter, Aaron Cruden, Ma’a Nonu and Piri Weepu.
After that Richie McCaw was holding up the Rugby World Cup, it was so shiny.
Ma’a Nonu and Piri Weepu were dancing on the van.
After, Ma’a Nonu got interviewed by a woman; Piri Weepu was putting things on his head.
Later on the Parade finished I was so happy that I got to meet the All Blacks.
What a fantastic story about meeting the All Blacks. You must have had so much fun. I like the way you have tried to use speech marks. Keep up the great work.
ReplyDeleteWHAT A FANTASTIC STORY ABOUT MEETING THE ALL BLACK AT TOWN DID YOU SAWED IT AT THE BIG SCREENAT TOWN IT IS NOISY `
ReplyDeleteBUT THANK YOU FOR YOUR FANTASTIC WRITING