Friday, March 9, 2018

My Story

I am learning to write my story and read to an audience.
By: David
To-day I went to soccer with my Mum and my Dad. We played and I was checking out to eat and I played again. I went and played a different game and I liked it. I went back home and eat. We went back home and eat and we went to the park for another play and we went back home for a sleep.


  1. I like the way you always remember to have something to eat while you are playing, David.

  2. You’re very lucky to always have food ready to energise yourself David. What is your favorite food to eat?

  3. Woow i hope u eat a healthy food david so proud of u n also i like ur story

  4. I'm so proud of you David, well done and keep smiling. Love you, great work

  5. Hello Rm 4,
    Great work on explain about what you were doing when you were playing with your mum or dad.


  6. Hi Rm4,
    I really liked Davids story.Next time you should re-read your writing and make sure it makes sense.

    Good Job