Wednesday, March 14, 2018

The fluffy white cat

I am learning to write an interesting story.
By Achilles.

13 comments:

  1. That is an interesting story, Achilles. Well done for completing it.

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  2. Great story Achilles. The cat in your story sounds like a very cute & fluffy cat. Well done. ��

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  3. I love ur story about cat achilles im sure u love the cat

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  4. Wow Achilles! I love this story about a the boy and the white cat with blue eyes. Your handwriting is so nice and tidy. I always like seeing your great artwork too. Keep up the great work! I am proud of you.

    Love from,
    Missy

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  5. I really like your story Achilles. You have neat and tidy handwriting and a great picture to match it. I will keep checking your school blog for the good work that you are doing with your class. Well done!

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  6. Hi Achilles. It is me Liam. Where did you see the white cat with blue eyes? Do you remember the grey cat on our street that is always around Mrs Higgins house?

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  7. Hi Achilies,
    You are a very good writer, I loved how you described the cat, it sounds very cute. I also really liked the drawing you made, it looks very artsy.

    Great Job!

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  8. Wow Achilles! Great Story, I see your handwriting and story line getting better and better! Keep it UP!!

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  9. Hi Achilies,
    This is a great story, I like how you drawn your picture and included details.Keep it up.

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  10. Hey Achilles,
    I like the way you have been working on your writing,so that your English can be more better when you speak.

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  11. Hey Achilles,
    This is great how you included the details in our writing on what you read.Great Picture you have drawn their.Keep it up. :)

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  12. Hey Achilles,
    Good writing, just try to make it look better a little bit, great work.

    Jerome

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