Tuesday, March 6, 2018

My story

I am learning to record my story.
By: Achilles

I went to the scary ghost house. He had skeletons and we went home.


  1. I wouldn't like to go to a scary ghost house. You must be very brave.

  2. Hi Achilles,

    I am too afraid to go to a scary ghost house! I know you are a very brave boy. When you get home today, can you tell me more about the scary house with the skeletons?

    Keep up the good writing and fantastic drawing Achilles.

    Love from,

  3. Hi Achilles,

    Its me Liam. I like your story. Were there zombies at the scary house too? So cool! And your drawing is lit.

  4. Hello Achilles,
    I am very happy to see your school work on your class blog. Keep up the good work because you are so awesome at writing and drawing. Maybe we can put your blog up on the big tv screen and you can read it to us?

    Have a good day and see you after school.


  5. Fakalofa lahi atu,
    Achilles, your writing and drawing are awesome. Its so nice to see all the stories from all the clever kids in class 4. I am happy that you are part of a great class of learners, with good teachers at St. Pius. Keep trying your best. We love you,
    Nena Mali and Papa Steven

  6. Hi 5 Achilles. You have used great interesting words. Keep it up. I am looking forward to read your next story.