A FUN TIME IN THE WEEKEND

In the night time there was a knock. Maybe it was our auntie? My Mum opened the door. It was my brother and our sister! Our Mum said, "Hello there. Come in."
My brother had a bag of clothes. He carried it into our room then he put his shoes in our room too. We were happy to see our brother.

Comments

  1. A nice piece of writing Ma'ata. I like the way you started by making me think about what the knock might be.

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  2. Hello Ma'ata,
    Great to see your writing on your class blog. I really like the way you started with a question and included using speech marks.

    Miss G :-)

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