Friday, July 5, 2013

Our Swimming Pool

At Saint Pius X we had a swimming pool and we have instructors named Kevin and Gillian. They teach us how to dive and float. The water is cold and when we first went in the pool Kevin told us to stand at the side and I felt good. I like Kevin because he is kind and helpful. I like that when he helped me how to kick and splash.

By Vanessa


  1. Hi Vanessa
    I really like how you use fill stop and capital letters in that story and i hope you have a good time at swimming keep up the good work up and next time I think you would maybe like to write a bite more.

  2. Hi Vanessa,

    I really like you writing you have written. I hope you had a very good time there with your class. Next time I think you should write a bit more. Keep up the good work Vanessa.