Thursday, August 23, 2012

An Athlete


An Athlete

An athlete is all by himself in the foreground. Maybe he's crying because he's lost. Maybe he is praying to God. The people at the back of him are looking at him. I smell the green grass. I hear the grass blowing. I am thinking i want to cheer him up. That man's hair is black. The man has stretchy blue pants. He is disappointed. The people are cheering happily.

Teanoano

5 comments:

  1. WOW!!! I'm proud Teano great gob.

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  2. I love the way you used your senses to help describe what you think is happening in the picture. Well done, Teanoano.

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  3. Wow that was so cool Teano and I love the way you put some picture on it, I hope room3 see it and I think they will love what you have done, So next time make your stories longer and put picture.

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  4. Hi, Teano I like your stories and by the way it is pretty good on your wall.Next time you make your word longer ok.

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  5. Hi teano I love the way you put picture on it and your word next time make your word longer ok.

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