Kia Ora, Greetings, Malo e Lelei, Talofa Lava and Malo e lelei. We are year 2 and 3 learners in the Tikiritia Learning Space. We are the Tikirita 3. Our teacher is Mrs Prasad. We look forward to your comments on our learning.
Tuesday, August 28, 2012
The Winner
The Winner
I see some people clapping and screaming and cheering. I can see a hockey stick and a white mouth guard. I can see a tall, strong woman with long blonde hair. I can see a woman who is happy because I think her team won. I think the woman is proud of herself. I cam see a stadium full of people. The hockey stick colour is blue and pink. I see a white and black tunic. I see her socks and her shoes. The shoe colour is pink and green and white. I think her coach is proud of her. I think she will get a medal and a bouquet full of flowers. I think the girl can smell the food. The woman is holding the hockey stick. I think the woman hit lots of goals.
Kalisi
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well done kalisi. good job kalisi.
ReplyDeleteLovely descriptive language, Kalisi.
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