The Winner


The Winner

I see an athlete by himself. The people can smell the food that they are eating. The boy can hear the crowd cheering for him. When he is kneeling he can feel the warm grass. I am thinking that he is crying his tears out because he is happy that he won the race and he is kind. I can see some other people in the background playing football and some are racing. I can see flags in the background. He is wearing tight blue shorts.


Saveu

Comments

  1. Nice description, Saveu. I also think he is crying for joy and is maybe saying a prayer of thanks. Well done for posting your writing.

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  2. well done saveu i love your discriptoin.and i think heys saying help me god.well done for posting your writing on the blog. by Courtney.

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  3. well done saveu I think heys saing to god help me god. by Courtney.

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  4. Great piece of writing Saveu. I like reading your writing because you use your capitals and full stop. Next time you can do better then this. Keep it up.

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