Friday, August 17, 2012

A SAD ATHLETIC RUNNER - a description

I see a man crying and bowing,  kneeling because he lost the race.I smell hot dogs and drinks. I see countries flags and the stadium roof. I hear people shouting and cheering very loudly. I see people on the seats.  


  1. wow charlie what a good day you had in the olympics, versing the other children I hope you had fun. well done charlie.

  2. You have described the picture well. I like your describing words. I like the way you have described it and people can understand what you are saying.

    Teanoano, Malia, Mikaela, Courtney :)