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Thursday, August 23, 2012

A man crying and disappointed


A man crying and disappointed

I see a boy sad and looking disappointed. I smell green grass and some mud. I hear clapping for other people. I think he he is praying. I feel like crying because it looks like he is crying. A big strong man has got muscles. I see stretchy blue shorts. I see people sitting on the stand. I see flags of countries on the top of the stadium. The boy has got a white t-shirt. He has got blue and yellow shoes. I like his hair because it is shaved. I like people who shave their hair. The athlete looks like he is praying or disappointed. The athlete looks like he is lost. On the t-shirt I see a big number. I can see the background and foreground.


Malia

8 comments:

  1. Lovely descriptive language, Malia. You really have made a big effort to tell what you can see in the picture.

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  2. Lovely descriptive piece of writing. I liked it how you talked about prayer and about the background as well. Keep up the Great Work

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  3. Good work Malia! I like the way you use big words like muscles and background and foreground. Well done.

    Motu and Marcus

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  5. Lovely Descriptive piece of Writing Malia. I liked it how you talked about Prayer and about the Background. Keep up the good work.

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  6. Well done Malia! this is a very great Descriptive about a man disappointed.
    I really enjoyed reading what you wrote about.
    next time just read your writing and make sure it makes sentence.

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  7. Well done Malia I like reading your piece of writing. I really like it how you talked about prayer and the background. Hopefully next time you could read your writing and make such that those make sentence...:)..:)

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  8. I love the way you look at the picture. You are very good at posting it on the blog.

    Saveu

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