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Friday, September 13, 2013

The Angry Rona and the Powerful Moon retold by Vanessa


Many years ago on a very dark forest lived Marama the moon and Rona and her two children. In a whare the children said to Rona "Bring us some water." Then Rona went and took a bottle but Marama hid behind a cloud and she was so mad that she tripped on a root. She screamed at Marama "You pineapple head. Come out from that cloud Marama." When Rona was getting fresh water the moon grabbed Rona as strong as he could. Rona became angry. When Rona was calling them the children looked up in the sky. She said to Marama "let me go!" But Marama didn't listen to her.

The message was don't talk rudely to people.

By Vanessa

2 comments:

  1. HI Vanessa
    It me Joanna I really like your story it was one of your best story that you have write.Also keep up the good work in your classroom with your teacher Mrs Pole.

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  2. Hi Vanessa\
    It me Joanna I really like your story that you have write also this is one of your best work that you have done so keep up the good work in your classroom .

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