Tuesday, September 3, 2013

The Hare and the Tortoise Retold by Macky

Once upon a time there was a show off Hare who was the fastest runner in the land. He saw a slow Tortoise walking alone in the bushes. The Hare asked Tortoise if he wanted a race. Hare said to Tortoise "You are very slow." The Hare ran as fast as he could. After a while he went for a sleep under a big tree and Tortoise went past Hare. He was still asleep when Tortoise was at the finish line. Hare woke up and ran as fast as he could. You go Tortoise! You won Tortoise!

The message is never give up!

By Macky


  1. That's right, Macky, never give up if you want to win.

  2. Hi Macy it me your soul friend i like your photo and your story keep it up

  3. good work Macy i like your writing and your story keep it up Macky